Tuesday, July 9, 2013

No Man Is An Island

                     
                        
               Once there was a girl named Rylai. She believes that being independent helps a person stand alone in his own feet. One day she had a big problem. She got low scores from her homework, projects, and tests at the first month of the second grading especially in Math and Science which she admits that it is her weak subjects but she excels in English subject. Because of these, her teacher talked to her that she may be kicked out of the school if she didn't improve her grades before the end of the second grading and so she need to strive to get high scores. At first, she didn't tell it to her family. For few weeks, she didn't let her brother and sister help her in studying because she believes that she can do it and improve her grades by only herself. Then she worked hard and improved her grades a little but then it is insufficient to pull her grades up. One day her sister saw her Math notebook and saw low grades. Her sister said that she should have asked them to help her in her studies and she shouldn't handle things only by herself especially when she can't do things properly. Her sister helped her in Math since it is her sister's favorite subject and she listens to her sister attentively and easily understood the lessons. Then her sister asked her if there are other subjects wherein she had a hard time understanding and she replied "Science." Then his brother helped him since her brother excels in Science and also saw her science notebooks with low grades. She also listened to his brother attentively and understood the lessons easily and her brother said that if there is something she doesn't understand in Science she should let him teach her.  Now she understood the lessons in Science and Math and after few weeks, she doesn't have a hard time in learning the lessons in Math and Science. After few weeks, her teacher saw her high improvements and let her continue in her high grades. They helped each other in their studies every time they had a hard time in it. From that day, she learned not to handle hard things only by herself and learned that it is important to ask help from others because there are some times in which you shouldn't always work/be independent.


















12 comments:

  1. it's a nice story. you can get moral lessons from it, like working hard and being helpful :)

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  2. Nice! It has lessons that every person should learn. You just lack some articles on some sentences. Know how to justify your post so that it'll look better. Hope you know the lesson of your story. :D

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  4. Very appropriate story for chlidren

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  5. It is a story with many moral lessons so good job.

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  6. naksss, you have a unique story, nice one SG!! :)))

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  7. Like Ashley and Joseph said, your story has many lessons that are appropriate for the children :) GOOD WORK

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  8. Nice one, SG~! Yours is the very different one. :)

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  9. Like the others said, it is a unique story.. Nice :)

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  10. This is one of the most unique stories I've read from your batch! :-)Good job!

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