My Most Admired Schoolmate
My
most admired schoolmate is also my classmate. He is Karl Adrian T. de Guzman.
He is handsome and cute. He has a dimple in both of his cheeks. Many also of my
classmates like him very much. I already know him when we were in Grade 7 but
we were not so close.
Many also of my classmates like him
very much. I like him because he is funny and always say jokes even though it’s
sell. I also like him because he always thinks that problems will just pass. He
is not also problematic and he is always thinking positively. I also admire him
because he is trustable and is a good friend despite his talkativeness. He is
also sweet and lovely. I also admire him because he is thinking and concerned
about his grades and is also good in playing computer games like DOTA.
nice one:)) (clap)(clap)(clap)
ReplyDeletejust a little improvement next time! :)
it'll be much better if it's longer and with more details but good job, Gio! :)
ReplyDeleteso sweet
ReplyDeleteYIEEEEE
Your essay is detailed. You also used SELL :) btw, nice work :)
ReplyDeletenice one :)
ReplyDeleteYour essay is nice. :)
ReplyDeleteSell? LOL I think there's no such word - 'TRUSTABLE'. Trustworthy maybe?? Hmm, that's what I noticed. Anyways, nice work. :)
ReplyDeleteGo SG. Hahaha. Karl is really handsome. :)) Nice work, btw. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteNice work SG Hahahahahahha. Well done. :))))
ReplyDeleteIts cool SG :D ="D
ReplyDeleteNice essay about your friend...
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate the construction of those sentences.
Well written.. :)
ReplyDeleteAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA OMG THIS IS SO. HAHHAHAHHAHA KARL IS SO HANDSOME, BTW.
ReplyDeleteHAHAHA. Good job, SG.
ReplyDeleteI think you have expressed your thoughts well but be sure to fix just some of the sentence fragments. You have a great flow of ideas about the subject matter, keep that up!
ReplyDeleteI am laughing too much to think of a proper comment. Cool post, tho. Joy Anne here.
ReplyDeleteHe's like me! :)) LOL. Nice post you got therrr. :))
ReplyDeleteIT WAS SOOOO ENTERTAINING! good luck with the both of you ! XD
ReplyDeleteWHAT THE? OK SWEET :">
ReplyDeleteGOOD ESSAY! BTW WHO IS KARL ADRIAN T. DEGUZMAN?
Nice GIO!!!!
ReplyDeleteSELL----- how much????