Monday, July 15, 2013

My Most Admired Schoolmate






 

 My Most Admired Schoolmate
           
            My most admired schoolmate is also my classmate. He is Karl Adrian T. de Guzman. He is handsome and cute. He has a dimple in both of his cheeks. Many also of my classmates like him very much. I already know him when we were in Grade 7 but we were not so close.

            Many also of my classmates like him very much. I like him because he is funny and always say jokes even though it’s sell. I also like him because he always thinks that problems will just pass. He is not also problematic and he is always thinking positively. I also admire him because he is trustable and is a good friend despite his talkativeness. He is also sweet and lovely. I also admire him because he is thinking and concerned about his grades and is also good in playing computer games like DOTA.

20 comments:

  1. nice one:)) (clap)(clap)(clap)
    just a little improvement next time! :)

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  2. it'll be much better if it's longer and with more details but good job, Gio! :)

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  3. Your essay is detailed. You also used SELL :) btw, nice work :)

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  4. Sell? LOL I think there's no such word - 'TRUSTABLE'. Trustworthy maybe?? Hmm, that's what I noticed. Anyways, nice work. :)

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  5. Go SG. Hahaha. Karl is really handsome. :)) Nice work, btw. Keep it up!

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  6. Nice work SG Hahahahahahha. Well done. :))))

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  7. Nice essay about your friend...
    I really appreciate the construction of those sentences.

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  8. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA OMG THIS IS SO. HAHHAHAHHAHA KARL IS SO HANDSOME, BTW.

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  9. I think you have expressed your thoughts well but be sure to fix just some of the sentence fragments. You have a great flow of ideas about the subject matter, keep that up!

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  10. I am laughing too much to think of a proper comment. Cool post, tho. Joy Anne here.

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  11. He's like me! :)) LOL. Nice post you got therrr. :))

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  12. IT WAS SOOOO ENTERTAINING! good luck with the both of you ! XD

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  13. WHAT THE? OK SWEET :">
    GOOD ESSAY! BTW WHO IS KARL ADRIAN T. DEGUZMAN?

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  14. Nice GIO!!!!

    SELL----- how much????

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